My father died while eating
peanut buttered toast and sliced bananas
peanut buttered toast and sliced bananas
Before he finished his last bite
his head fell back as if to inspect
a cobweb on the ceiling
his head fell back as if to inspect
a cobweb on the ceiling
This is how my mother found him
when she returned to the breakfast table
carrying her toothbrush smeared with mint paste
when she returned to the breakfast table
carrying her toothbrush smeared with mint paste
“I felt for a pulse at his neck, but
there was no beat,”
she explained for the eighth time
there was no beat,”
she explained for the eighth time
Neighbors flood the phone lines
and stuff the refrigerator full
of wild rice hot dish, tuna salad, and slaw
and stuff the refrigerator full
of wild rice hot dish, tuna salad, and slaw
Instead of his arms hanging limply
at his side, Mom described how they were spread out
palms up, his devotional still open on the table
at his side, Mom described how they were spread out
palms up, his devotional still open on the table
Like a skydiver prepared to take flight
5 comments:
Ascendance.....a lifting, after all the wonders lived out..the body is light and the soul is lighter, lifting as final response....I loved my dad in the same way you love yours...my heart aches for your loss today....
Such a beautiful response to Susan ' s poem of love and loss
Feeling your pain, Susan. My heart goes out to you. <3
All my love, Susan. Your dad was a wonderful man.
Dear Susan,
Losing a parent is a great loss. Sending you my hugs of comfort and shared sorrow for this loss. Your poem lifted me. May your muse continue to help you and inspire you for the impending period of grief. May your family support each other in sharing the memories of your father.
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